shoffy
Wannabe

Joined: May 12, 2008
Posts: 1
Location: York, PA |
Hi Jim,
I visited the link you provided and found 2 songs. I listened to the first one, "no greater love."
As it will soon become apparent... I'm just getting started with pro recording... but I wanted to toss some thoughts your way anyway. Maybe learn something by being a stupid newb.
1. I think some volume automation would be effective. There is a build-up in the song where the music gets louder... but her vocal level stays the same. I think this is the biggest item I noticed. The vox volume doesn't move with the song. (in my less-than-rookie opinion)
2. In regards to vocals, I know the song is meant to be soft and expressive (again, newb opinion) but I feel the vocals lack body, or fullness. I think I know what you were going for in regards to the delicate vocal tone (I think?) you were going for... but feel that *something* could be done to thicken them up. (not sure what... maybe light doubling? duplicate track, toss on some heavier compression, mix w/ dry? i dunno... i'm an idiot lol)
3. Regarding vocals, for the last time hehe, I wonder if some low harmonies would compliment the song? I say wonder because I'm not sure... One part of me says yes (again, low volume, even if only to thicken lead vox). The other says... don't take away from her vocals. Like the artist Sia. Delicate vox... no backup vox to take away from it.
But... I like vocal layering... but just a personal preference.
4. The instrumental mix was great. I liked every part of it. I'm a sucker for a crisp high end and definitely got it with this piece.
Overall I really enjoyed the songs production and would just revisit the vocals again. I think you said you were anyway next session... so... I just wrote a lot to tell you nothing I guess? 
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